What do you think of these storys?

Wow I think you should definitely continue on with you're stories. You are a very good writer, you're stories are so good their worthy enough to be in a movie in my opinion. Anyways, I hope to see you continue on with you're writings you're very creative and thought throughout the entire passage. It's sounds like a summary to a well written novel by Nicholas Sparks if you ask me. If he were to write about that, that is, usually love story's. But, anyways keep up the good writing. I hope to see you're writing in stores one day. Title Trap ( Ver. 2 def. )